|Reviews for America's Sweetheart|
| DragonAiua chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
| Emma chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
You write good. I love it. Add another chapter really soon!
| Jessie chapter 4 . 11/26/2004
Yeow! That was great! I absolutly love this story, i'm glad i'm being a bum instead of actually doing some work, i still have one exam left tomorrow THEN I'M ON HOLIDAY! I'm so excited eh, and i hope you update! Please keep updating, even if you don't(for some extremly weird reason cause this is GREAT) get your 5 reviews, do update because i know i'm lazy at reviewing, hell i don't even have an account yet, but ido read and i know there's others out there who read but don't review, and it would SUCK BIGTIME if you don't keep this up and finish it! There's nothing worse on this site when people start writing awesome storys, then stop writing! I'm going to shut up now!But great chapter i love the characters, her mum's fantastic!
| Solid Chocolate Bunnies chapter 4 . 11/25/2004
UPDATE! that's all. good story, by the way.
| Blue Eyed Smile chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
I like your story a lot. Eve and Jesse are both really great characters and I can't wait to find out more about Clay. Jesse just seemed so sweet in this chapter. I hope your planning on continuing this. :D
| Chookstar chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
Yeah...i'm supposed to be studying for exams right now, but decided it would be much funner to go through my favs on here and see if anyone updated! That was a really cool chapter, well written and moved everything along nicely. The whole personal bubble space cracked me up, i thought there was only a few of us like that in the world! That was really cute the with jesse not being able to handle a girl crying - nice guy i say gorgeous hug too! Update soon, i love that your chapters are long as well, i can't stand it when people post like two paragraphs!
| Jolly B chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
aw that was so cute. but i was disappointed that Eve gave up so easily. i like it when the girl is strong. but Eve's cool. i like this story.
| Jolly B chapter 2 . 11/6/2004
Fricken awesome plot dude! I think htis story is gonna be huge so keep going!
| Chookstar chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Yeah this is a P.S ok?
P.S - I love the characters, especially jesse, his sarcasm is great. I like how neither of them are perfect either, they both have some crap in their lives. Besides it's pretty funny this kinda punk guy is best mates with the schools golden boy...
| Chookstar chapter 2 . 11/6/2004
Hey i'm loving this! Your writing style is great, and easy to follow, and this plot is going to take it somewhere so write more and post up quick as! I'm supposed to be studying for exams right now, um yeah i think i'd rather be reading more of your story!
| hello chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
it's cute.. I like it.. can't wait for the next update!
| KnotFamous chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
I Loved it! Please, Write more!
| endless laughter chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
u've got to continue. it's seems like it'll be so cute.