Reviews for America's Sweetheart
DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 6 . 8/30/2005
Aw. Isn't Eve being a bit mean? And did Corey print a bad column about Eve? And Clay just like..disappeared. Heh, continue soon!
Finger Dingbat chapter 6 . 8/27/2005
boo-hoo, jesse 100 times better then luke! ah well, hopefully eve will realsie that soon... oh well... by the way amazing story, absolouty love it, just one suggestion, though eves life is farily tramatizing, and intresting, WHAT ABOUT EVERY ONE ELSE'S! lol. i think instead of talking about eves why dosen't she have a converstion about somebody else's... (namely jesse's, cos his is just as tamatizing as hers, and then they would relaise they where MADE for each other * hopefully sign* lol. sry about that, but please keep it up (and you've probally guessed who my fav. charecter is allready... :) ) but i do love this story so write more!, write quick! write well!
sweetone0018 chapter 6 . 8/22/2005
I love this story! I love Jesse! ICan't wait til the next chapter!
PolkadotGumboots chapter 6 . 8/22/2005
I think I'm in love with this, so great! More please
renegade01 chapter 6 . 8/20/2005
Hey there!

Really cool story you got here and even though it made me crack up loads of times, I think my fave bit was when Tima says 'it lives' in this chapter cause I say that to my sisters all the time and that was just the icing on the cake ;)

Sounds like you have a busy schedule. But despite that, i'm glad to see you're not giving up on this story, cause dude, that's just pure evil. Let's not even go there.

I just thought wouldn't it be funny if Eve ends up with neither Jesse, Clay or Luke and she picks another completely random guy. Somehow, though I don't think thats gonna happen. Well, right now I don't know who's my favourite out of the three *cough*pick Bonds*cough*

Suggestion: Maybe you could do a poll...? Laterz _
Stephanie chapter 6 . 8/15/2005
I adore it! It's absolutely fantastic, and I love all of the male characters. (Don't get me wrong, Eve, Tori, and Tima are awesome too). Keep up the fantastic work.
skippydabeaver chapter 6 . 8/15/2005
Yayness! This is really, /really/, hilarios. PLease keep writing! Pretty please!
class.act chapter 6 . 8/14/2005
over a month! where ARE you?
FictionPressWriter chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
*whine* why is eve being such a bitch...jesse is just too hot and sweet...meow...ill take him though
xxreixx chapter 6 . 8/10/2005
man, to pull the plug on a story like this would be a total waste of time and effort. besides, you dont write a story just for the reviews, you've got more than enough reviews at it is. you're doing great so just get that thought into your head. sorry to kinda rant, but i think this is a great story and a big shame to just throw it all away. keep it up
Dragonmount chapter 6 . 8/7/2005
Whoa, Eve sure...has...attitude...Well anyways, great story, kicks booty. Hoping for updates. :D
nadljfaithglingh chapter 6 . 8/7/2005

I loved the ending to this chapter! Go Eve! You show that Bonds boy _ (Hot though he be...)

Although I do admit to being minorly freaked out at the shorter chapters, but that's just 'cause I couldn't find my spot. But now I am cool, calm and very very happy to read your latest.

Keep up with the great work! This is still one of my most fave stories -Kera
maho.shojo chapter 6 . 8/6/2005
Haha, That was AWESOME! but i might have said that already... hmm.. yup i did! But now i can say.. it's doubly awesome! haha, does that even work?

I guess there is no Matt anymore.. oh well. I really like Eve's attitude. hehe, and to stick to a workout thing... that's crazy! i would never be able to do that. Did you know that running uses all/most of the muscles in your body? Its the best work out..and it's free!

... I sound like my PE teacher.. but she's cool... anyways... totally off topic... i believe i was saying how absolutely wonderful your story was! hehe. Well, it is... and i look forward to another chapter of America's Sweerheart!


oh, by the way... love the long chapters! and wow... it used to 22 whole chapters? that's alot! haha, congrats! on... writing so much? lol. but the 6 long chapters work well too!
maho.shojo chapter 4 . 8/6/2005
hehehe, awesome! So, will matthew be mentioned ever again?Maybe i should finish until chapter 5 before asking...well... onwards! hehe
Shaina chapter 6 . 8/2/2005
Damn I really like this story! But I have to say.. i think Eve was being really bitchy in this last chapter.. I mean.. she likes Jesse, so why would she turn all mad at him?

she should of stuck with the boyfriend plan, hehe :)

Jesse is my favorite guy :) I don't like Clay... bo

lol please update soon! Also, if you have any character pics, plz show me!
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