wow this was EXCELLENT! i loved it, so well crafted and put together. you should be a freakin writer!

OMG THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! when she found the grave... but she didnt put it there... WOWOWOWOW! lol! in case u didnt notice.. this is pere (smk) omg.. i just typed that. i meant (sak). lol no one else will get this except maybe kate n pia n katia.. OKAY EVERYONE WILL! bye bye pear and pere (i added my email so u could laugh)

Hello, this was very good! It could have done with a bit more suspense. Slow down the scary parts and add some details to make it horrifying!
The ending was espeically good, when they found Catherine guilty of murder. Very twisted. ;)