Reviews for The Life O' Leroy Jackson
Carradine chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Thanks for pointing out how I was wrong in "Halo: Combat Illogical."

Did you have any other problems with the article or, with the exception of "To Cheah," anything else i've written?

Don't mean to pester you, but would you be so kind as to help me not be an asshole?

-This has nothing to do with my opinion of you but did you think of the RAMO 600 & 650 or did you check it out to be right?

If you checked it out, how did you? did you do a search at .ru or did you like google it? By the way, if you did use .re you forgot to mention the Mechem NTW-20.

If you didn't check it out, do you like guns that look like that and the Iver Johnson AMAC-1500 and stuff like it?

What I'm asking is this: what kinds of tastes do you have in weapons? I'm curious.
Sentinel Talos chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Welcome to fictionpress! Expanding your horizons, eh? Anyway, an interesting short story. You've done your research. Just out of curiosity, is this all you're going to do with this story or are you going to continue/expand on it? BTW, nice touch with the 'apes' line.