Interesting chapter. Makes me wanna read further.

OMG just finished this and i love it so much. You are a very talented writer and have great potential. Thanks for sharing this, i really enjoyed reading it.

WWtAB

Waiting still for updates as I reread this story! :)

this chapter made me laugh the end was not what i was expecting and i dont think noah was expecting her making him read. hehe

This story is so amazing to me, it is realistic, and extremely well written. 5 years to update! Oh how I wish you would finish this, for the sake of many avid fictionpress readers!

a 3 year break?

C'mon pick up that pen and start writing

I will provide the light bulb and you can bring in the brilliant idea (i think there is a better way to phrase that). Anyway, i hope that you set inspiration soon and do some crazy writing.

I think two years is plenty long to drudge up some inspiration...yeah?

I can totally identify with protagonist of your story. I can't wait to read more. Are you almost done with your story?

I can honestly say that this is the best, most truest, most beautiful story i have ever read.

so real, so great!

i usually dont read stories twice, like ever, but i've read this story about seven times and it still doesn't get old.

i love the way you wrote Cora's character. most people when they write a story where the lead has self esteem problems they make it out like it's something that can be gotten over in a day, or if someone tells them they're beautiful. but in truth, it's not and you've captured that amazingly.

with noah...m, all i can hope is that there are more guys like him. i like how you didn't make him out to be unrealistic and angel like. you made him that sweet guy with the kind heart; the type of honest man you dont come by a lot. i love how he wanted to help Cora, i love how he took his time with her and let her set the pace, but also told her when she was being silly. he told her what no one else would and he helped her realize that there really were no reasons for her to feel insecure about herself.

i love that about his character.

gosh there's just so much i can say about this story...too much.

great job, very well written.

i would definetly buy this book if it were to be published. i'd by two copies; one to keep at home on my book shelf and another to keep in my purse so i'd always have it on me.

i felt so inspired after reading this story, so uplifted.

with Cora's character i can relate to her in so many ways that it gives me a kind of hope. it makes me think a little while longer about why i feel the way i do.

im babbling i know, but this story is just that great that it deserves to be babbled on...trufully, i almost cried at on point, it was just that touching.

even if you never get to finishing this story it will be fine. i want to thank you for starting it in the first place, it was extremely well written, beautiful, touching, etc...too many words can describe this story so i'll just settle for: "great job!i hope you finish this one day and get it published."

-Brittany Clarke

truthfully thats probably one one of the most realistic sex seens ever lol. Most of the ones i read are when virgin girl are humping like they've been doing it for ages lol

ive been womdering if ashley is going to come back

i love their little witty banters! very amusing

Ha! little Coras growing up

I love that show!