|Reviews for I love you so much|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
There,—you said it all,
¿What's left for me to say Dear?
Only kisses count.
But, ¡no! Perhaps, ¡yes!
Could it be then sometimes so,—
Sun rays ask bright moon.
¿How can it be so?
¿When did these butterflies go?
Snow flakes melting soft.
¿Is that what you thought?
¿That only your heart burst red?—
Mine was shred and bled.
Now, understand this,—
How mad soul's blue sanity,—
Permeates deep heart.
I purse my two lips,
Tongue searches for your sweet taste,
Onion smothered steak.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
i know these feelings, very well expressed.
| EvilNeko13 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
This is very good. Again, something understandable and real. I like your free-style writing.
| LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Damn...I wish I had someone who can say stuff like this to me...This is just an amazing piece of work. great work. This kind of poem just show how good you are. Damn, I wish I knew you well and knew you in a person...Keep writing, ur awsome