Reviews for Ride On The Train
ossining chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Aw, that was a twist. Cute, too, I must say. (I know,I know, ppl hate it when their stuff is "cute," unless it was meant to be, but eh, it's my review.)
Satya Kokala chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
The suspense is well built in a few short sentences and the anti-climax is fantastic.

The job is well done. Keept it up.
Genius-Ben chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
I really like it. It's not exactly long but it says a lot in just a few short lines. Very entertaining. Jolly good! Bravo.
The Benster! (One must always sign one's name with an exclamation mark if one wishes to get anywhere in life.)
bloom-obsessed chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
suspensful at first ... hilarious at the end. I love it!
Makoto15 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
I like your story! I'm also always scared when I'm sitting in the train and some weird guy stares at me Well done!