Reviews for Water Girl
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
haha very cute...
JohnnyGodfather chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Very sexy. I liked it. I do not know your gender, however, so it is hard for me to speculate on the meaning of the poem besides a broad, sexual one.

Anyway, I read some of your translated poems... well, I read them.

I think this early work is better. The translated stuff seems yuppieish and superficial philosophical.
heartkreuz chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
wow...i really like this poem. its really mysterious!