Reviews for The Way
a muse's inspiration chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Wow...Yeah...I like. Very muchly so.:)
Pamplemousse chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
I liked this, it poses some interesting it upPamplemousse
DameNoire chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
I liked that. You made interesting questions. The second line took me some time to fully understand but I liked it nonetheless.
-x- DameNoire
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
I liked the analogy of the dog and man! You wrote this very well! Keep up the great work
Beth Stanley chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
This type of poetry makes me actually think, and that is something I do so often as it is, I love it. Please keep on writting, good luck with the translating.
Luv yas,
Beth
Deeply-N-Love chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
Brilliant... You really are! :o)
Keep on writing! You've got style!
And tx to have R&R my work...
W!nny -xox-
A View of MidNight chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
Very touching. I believe in Buddhist philosophy and this does give some perspective. Good job!
ylem chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Ah, I like this very much. For some reason it reminded me of Naomi Shahib Nye, or at least the first line, the born of two nations...I love the little Zen koan stuck in there (I practice zazen & am quite fond of koans...). I like the tranquility line because it reminds me of the Buddhist/Taoist dilemma of being in a complete state of peace yet attempting to give up all sense of self, but still having self if you feel at peace. Simplistic. Very well done.