|Reviews for i try|
| butterfly-touch chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
wow. I can feel the emotion here. Nice.
| AgainstAllOdds chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
That was really good; i espescially like the line "Like ink on skin from passing days." DEEP The only thing i wasn't sure about was the line "It grows and grows."It seems like it doesnt really belong there. Besides that though it was REALLY good, ur a wonderful writer. Keep it up!
| sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
that was amazing. i wish i could write as well as u!
| GoAskAlice chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
guess who luvs u! lol once again not surprised to be shocked and awed by the fantasticness (if that's even a word) of wat u right...it's absolutely amazing and i'm borderline jealous,but not quite lol;)