|Reviews for Wonderwall|
| Iris Early chapter 25 . 1/6/2008
it's so lovely!
i just read it all through in one go and it's four in the morning now. but it was completely worth it because it's a lovely lovely sweet story and you can actually write in actual sentences with actual formatting, which is amazing, and your narrative is fluid and natural and. yeah, i really liked it.
| FireOfJuly chapter 25 . 12/27/2007
read the story all the way through in three days. it was that good. needs some revision in some parts, as u mentioned, but LOVED theoverall concept of your work. A! or... TWO THUMBS UP!
| SharkieBite chapter 25 . 12/15/2007
WOW! Just wow! That was amazing. You write some pretty good slash darlin'.
I noticed you like the word "arse". For some reason that work makes me crack up.
By the way, where did this story take place? I think you metiond it no being in America. So Australia and England are the only other places I know of that mostly speak english. If it's Australia, I will be extreamly jealous because I have always dreamed of living there and if I hear there are hot gay guys in bording schools there, I'll have to find a way to get there immediately.
| FluffVampyre chapter 25 . 12/1/2007
That was so amazing! I just finished reading it and I got like really excited and then disappointed, then excited again...! I was really pleased by reading this. You did a very good job!
| A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 25 . 10/28/2007
:] you're kind of really amazing and i'm madly in love with your stories and stuff.
well, i like stupid post-it notes better, but that was written more recently so... it doesn't mattr. i'm babbling.
i love your stuff.
| Sangre Azul chapter 15 . 10/21/2007
Ah, I loved this story so completely and utterly that I read it all in one night. And even though I thought the ending could use a bit of work I still thought it was great. Jamie was such a believable character and so were Bree and Kate.
| Aquafied chapter 25 . 9/23/2007
amazing story really
i loved it.
| vampyricangel chapter 25 . 9/17/2007
This review is about the story as a whole, not just Chapter 25.
I first want to start out by saying that I loved the story. Of course, I have always been a sucker for a good slash story. I realize that you borrowed a few of the characters, but I must say that you did a nice job with creating your own characters.
My only concern is that there are a few loose ends which should have been tied up. We never find out what happens with Bree. It seems a little sad that she is without someone. Oh, did I forget to mention, I'm a hopeless romantic. I can't help but enjoy the romantic aspect of a story.
It might be nice if you created an epilogue for the story. I realize that so much time has passed since you have finished it, but I think an epilogue would let the reader know what happens in the future. I personally am dying to know what happens with these characters.
My only regret is that I only just found your page. I have been reading stories on FictionPress for a while, and am surprised that I just recently found you.
I am wondering if you could recommend any other stories or authors.
Thanks for writing such a great sotry!
~The Vampyric Angel
| XxTheDutchessxX chapter 25 . 8/29/2007
I've read this story in one day and I love it. It's one of the best slash I've read so far. I'm just happy that jamie and Brian came through. Love It!
| Miss.Me So HAHA chapter 11 . 8/25/2007
'Settle petal.' I love it! .
| Miss.Me So HAHA chapter 8 . 8/25/2007
This is starting to mak me think of slave and master :D
| Miss.Me So HAHA chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
what does 'be over the moon." mean?
| Miss.Me So HAHA chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Aw! I really like it!
| Kasaki Kihoya chapter 25 . 8/22/2007
WOW! I loved that story it was so freakin' cute! I'm soo happy it all worked out in the end... I'm such a sappy freak..!
Well, thax for another great story! And I hope you update Stupid Post It Notes soon!
| Kasaki Kihoya chapter 11 . 8/22/2007
Yes. It is the worst chapter you've writtin' so far. Get over it. There have been worse.