Reviews for Tired of Waiting
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Loved the strong language, great tone created. Short length but right to the point and stays in people's head. I think if "something that" was changed to "someone who" it would be more personal and emotional.

Overall loved it )

~fleur
painted eyes chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I like this as its just raw emotion, right in your face. The last line is very sad, though...in a good way, if you know what i mean?

Keep up the good work!

~painted
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
that happens me to me again. patience may be a virtue,but i don't have that. nice job with this!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Corrected errant pen's errors,

But can these stilted thoughts be straight?

Though other domains may be right,

Where will heart's flutterings alight?

Thus life can bring us strange horrors,

Causing us huge immense tremors,

While laughing at all those rumors,

We sit and a cigar gay light.

p.s. I promise not to misspell is again until the very next time—*lol* m
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
i know that feeling! oh, my fav ive reviewed today! by far!