Reviews for Circles
SnoWhiteQueen chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I love the last two lines.
Intrepid chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Wonderful personification of the circles. My favorite line: "Circulated the light"
a duel of pens 111 chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
ive read that before. i always like ti. u write ahort poems, but they are alwasy good. and how do you get your poems singel spaced? it always double spaces mine. gr...

haha, i laiuught at "tim" in your other poem. he doesnt know how true that is...*giggle* the sexy butterfly!
sirius chatham chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Wow. That was amazing.
Says so much in so few words. Really really good concept, and good job executing the idea. I really like this poem. Says a lot.
Sirius Chatham
ps r/r my stuff too