|Reviews for shoes|
| this is britt chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
you will forget the rosebud turning black see the new moon the bright full moon- that and the last stanza are brilliance written down and captured.
| wind up car in motion chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
I loved it, in all its strangeness.
| lronMaiden chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
heh, that definitely WAS strange. But i LOVED it! i don't know the point, but hey... surprising amount of imagery and feeling for something so ... strange. Keep it up... i think.