Wow, this is beautiful.

AWESOME POEM! I'm adding this to my favorites list right...now. You have extreme talent. The wording, the phrasing, the imagery...Everything EXQUISITE. It is beautiful, tragical, emotional, everything a poem should be. Love it, love it, love it. I am impressed and wowed. You are an awesome writer.

Very well written. I liked it.

That was amazing. I wish my poetry was half as good as yours. Mine is just me getting my pitiful teen angst together and attempting poetry. Which doesnt work. By the way, I hope we can bury the anger that you showed in your reveiw of my rant. You seemed a bit enraged with me. At the time, I thought it might have been the fact that I am gay, but I read your bio, and if you love "homo sex" as you refer to it, than that couldnt be the reason. So, I hope you could give me more brutally honest reveiws on my poetry, they would be much appreciated.

Oh, wow. This was very well written, I got a lot of great imagery from it. Keep up the great work! _

Oh my God-I loved it! lol, something that I really really enjoyed because I'm a sadist-masochist. And well, as far as necro goes, just because you die a virgin doesn't mean you have to stay one. lol. I hate to say this, but you made a VITAL error. In your profile, you said you weren't a good writer. Well, you're dead wrong. I look forward to reading more of your wrok, esp. your poems.~Dream Forever

Impressive. I've only read it once so far and my comprehension level is low so I don't quite understand it though I'm sure things will become more clear to me once I've read it a few more times. The poem was good, the rhythm was nice and it was original. I loved the way you used your obviously wide vocabulary in this poem, it really fit in with the theme. The ironic part is, I just found out who Charles de Gaulle was today and that certainly helped things. lol. I'm still lost as to what exactly a Nephithet is but, maybe I'll figure it out. Awesome poem though.

'Tis like a festering sore infested with maggots...

I have to admit that you have a talent with words.

Good poem. A formal tone that I'm not quite comfortable with, but some great lines. I loved the ending, it was very strong, really beautiful.

vey talanted

"once again I long for the filth that lies in Nephithet city of angels shame..." that line is one of my favorites it's very attention grabbing.

Very mysterious. I like your poem. Great job!

I liked this, manipulation of words if your strength.

The dark themes drove me to it, and I wasnt dissapointed (sp?)

Did you even red what I Wrote I told people. "Wicca is a good religion" is the point i am trying to make. I'll have a second chapter ou before you do. Tink II

Darling, if you want to make fun of my poems, just say so in the first place. :P

Dolly

Hey Cthulu

Thanx 4 your review. You're right. John Stein is up himself. Voronwe too. Don't listen. This WAS y amazing.

"Come my child and we shall see I, a nouveau Charles de Gaulle,

And hear my tale of decadence from whence my damnation arose.

The tomb holds dear pleasures for one willing to try,

And from one can keep her 'til as one we both die.

I look to the earth to taste the humiliation of the sky. "

I love the last verse.

See ya round

OM