Reviews for What Do I Want?
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Women tend to be so harsh on themselves,

I could go into a long diatribe,

About evolutionary reasons,

Why this critique is something that makes sense,

But,—it only makes sense for the species,

And so, each individual should try,

And love a little,—Live a little more,

Of what they are,—& what they are to be,

For surely this is what God meant for us.
kerbieflaw chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
the meaning behind this poem is really deep... keep it up
myno chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
everyone goes through that stage i think, guys included. Remember though, that the image you see in the mirror is often not what others see, and someone out there thinks you are beautiful and wonderful- you're bf perhaps? Not one of your best, but its a decent poem.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
hum i go thru this too. tho i havent really changed. to me, im still fat and ugly so meh... i dunno. i know what u mean tho. dont worry, i think ur an awesome person. :)