|Reviews for Hide|
| sTrive chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
m... that was like eating a sugar cookie... delicieux! Needless to say, I luv it. It's kinda' like my own poem 'Taste the Rainbow'- you might like it. _
| Groovy Angel chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Excellent poem. I love your imagery, particularly in the first four lines of the poem with "smudged", "dried and irremovable", "fog" - very good use of description and I like then idea that even these factors cannot hide the reflection. You write this poem very well and capture the essence of growing up well. I know the feeling, it gets all too much at times. Nicely written, well done.