Reviews for For Debbie
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Well written, honestly holds emotions. I'm sorry for your friend.
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
I'm very sorry about your friend's death... and in some ways, hypothetically really, I understand. Your poem is very beautiful and compassionate, but what I really want to say is that I'm more than sure that she's in a better place... no one deserves so much pain, but fate is fate, and all we can really do is live off of the good memories and cry at the bad.
Grape chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Wow, this was really good. The emotions in it were really powerful, and it flowed beautifully. Great job.
Chocolate Herrings chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
I think that you have given your friend one of the best gifts anyone could. You have let her live in your words, and very beautiful words they are.
"Does the walker choose the path, or the path the walker?"
Pareathe chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
The poem was truly beautiful.
I'm so, so sorry to hear about your loss, sweetie. I'm sending you a huge hug through the net-lines, and I'll keep you and her family in my thoughts.
Moon860 chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
oh, hun, i'm sorry! :(
must have been really bad huh?
nice poem though :(
Moon860