Reviews for The Life And Times Of Little Miss AntiSocial |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet chapter. Nothing really else to say, but can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi... it's me, again... sorry i couldn't update i was to busy with what my so-called-friend was saying behind my back... blech... anyways. I'm glad you got another chapter up today it gave me alittle cheering up oddly. Anyways... vincent better take her back, and as much as it would be a good plot in the story for him to have a girlfriend... you used it in the emo boy stories... which i seriously think you should start another series of them... but i doubt its going to happen... Anyways, hope you update soon... **Wilting-Tears** |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm starting to have a lot more respect for Vincent's mother... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ANOTHER good story woman. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that Emo Boys Do Cry is being turned into a movie; can't let go yet, can you? I do wish you'd have gone into Vincent and Ellie's relationship a little more, gotten us a little more attached before you tore them apart. I loved the chapter 4 poem though! "Roses Are Red Violets Are Blue I Have A Bottle Of Jack Daniels Waiting For You" That would do it for me too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Technicolor is one of my favorite words, I've been writing a story around that single word. And Lover I Don't Have To Love is Jacklyn's theme song of sorts, if you hadn't caught that yet. I just thought that was amusing... I'm going to read chapter five now, because it's there and I'm impatient. I'll give you a real review then, I just wanted to mention those two things because I thought they were interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first I liked Blink, but him ruining Vincent and Ellie's relationship? NO! Does Blink like her or something? I don't like Vincent's mother either, if I was Vincent I would have lost all control and hurt her. Throwing away his picture, ugh! Good work on the story though, I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() Wicked awesome allusions you've got going to so many things there. This story reminds me of a book I read called Gingerbread. Clean cut, crystal clear, and to the point. You're a very good writer, keep up the good work. Fantastic storyline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah...his mom is such a bitch... |
![]() ![]() ok, so did Blink tell Vincent to break it off with Ellie? Cuz im confused. Plz update. |
![]() ![]() ok, so did Blink tell Vincent to break it off with Ellie? Cuz im confused. Plz update. |
![]() ![]() ok, so did Blink tell Vincent to break it off with Ellie? Cuz im confused. Plz update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He can't play Matt... he's so not Matt. I could pick a better Matt up off the streets! Ok, sorry. Anyways, he better come back... I know he WILL come back... he has to right? ok fine leave me in the dark... update more! now... i command you (alright... you don't have to listen to me...) **Wilting-Tears** |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That is quite an interesting connection. I'd have never gotten that, and it probably doesn't help that I've never watched Angel... This could be interesting. I've got no idea where you're going with this, I can only assume that I have inspired you to make your characters do everything they aren't supposed to do. Alcohol, check. Sex, check...Jacklyn would approve. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. This makes me, feel so lovey-dovey. |