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![]() ![]() hey a bit of forced rhyming in sdome parts but a good message and fairly well written keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice... I think the rhyme added to the effect rather than take away from it. Lisa |
![]() ![]() ![]() c'est vrai...et c'est un bon poem...vie est bonne...d'accord, je taise maintenent...a bientot! vish |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the format! Very nicely said too. Keep up the good work |