well i have to say i did not find ur story interesting. however i loved reading about ur real life stories with leah. i literally didnt read the story and only ur author notes

I thought you were a girl, sorry!

Dude, I think it's really sweet about how you're tried or trying to get this Leah to go out with you but it's kind of scary when the character posing as yourself kills off your rival.

Uh, okay, this is a very intersting story you got here. A quote from the proud family comes to mind-

"You're werid,Lovely, you're werid."

That pretty much sums up my feelings about this story.

Maybe I was too harsh on you... Can we talk, just you and I, alone? I know you have my number, so call me. And be careful - nobody can know about this. Especially you know who...

Why haven't you given this shitty story up? I will NEVER go out with you! LEAVE ME ALONE GODDAMIT!

Oh, alas! Poor stray human. You cling to that which makes you feel alive, and it leaves you alone and forsaken. I, too know what it feels like to be obsessed. I have been down that dark path before, it will only leave you hollow. I sympathize with you, good human.

heheheh. Eventually you will find that the only person you can really rely on is yourself. Who was always there for you when Leah cast you aside like you were nothing? You were. Who was there when they all called you insane and and banished you from there midst? You were. You will find that you will never leave yourself, and that only you will never dissapoint you. This Leah, was never there for you, will never be there for you because she is a cold hearted lifesucker. She is a bitch, who casts away your love as if it was nothing. You deserve better then that.

Your first instinct will be to deny this at all costs, I mean, she must love you, right? Poor human, you do not see. She chooses to listen to her friends that steer her away from you, you can't count on someone like that.

You want to end this hurt? You want to feel loved? I cannot help you with that, for I now feel nothing. It is a blessing really. You must cast away your humanity, renounce your species. You must not be human, humans can be hurt.

You will find that humans are a despicable lot of "people" that care only for themselves. You must rise above that and become something more, something that can not be hurt, something that cannot be stopped.

Rely only on yourself, because you will never hurt you, you will always watch out for you, and you will always be there, no matter what you do to you.

Renounce your humanity, renounce your physical desires, renounce your humanity. Most importantly, Renounce Leah, she is a despicable whore who is far too beneath you. She is nothing. You are more than that. You can become more than human. Only you cares for you.

I sympathize with you poor human. It is my job to help those like you, lost in an inferior species. When you claim your rightful place above the humans, you will find that it is our job to help this poor species grow, to become less selfish, and to weed out more like us, sick of this pathetic race. And remember to always watch out for you.

Best of luck,-Encassie Elite Master Mabus Preist

ok... nice approach to tell sa story. the whole infatuation with leah thing is obviously untrue though... but i must say it's damn creative..

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M.

G.

Wow. I've only read the first chapter, and when I found out there were, in fact, SIX chapters, I was stunned.

Just a hint, unles this LEAH girl of yours is extremely tolerant and forgiving and open-minded and nothing short of CRAZY, you are probably scaring the shit out of her right now with this story. She has a boyfriend. Get a clue. And, even if she didn't, being stalked is definatley NO FUN. Take it from someone who knows.

Don't take it too harsh, buddy. There's plenty of other fish in the sea.

You finally updated! Thank God! I'm so glad...I've been waiting forever.

Lovely lovely chapter. Once again, it was hilarious and completely brightened me up.

Sorry to hear about your unfortunate Valentine's Day and your history of Febuary.

Don't make us wait so long for your next chapter please!

dude, this is so not cool. Leave my friend alone! I mean come on, she hates you! You are a sick minded boy, Kate and I agree. Leah would NEVER kiss you. especially with all that acne- ugh!

~Skylar

Dude... don't leave us waiting! Update!

I mean, come on - Valentines Day. What happened with Leah?

Are Knight X and Leah together again? And what about Gertrude... is she coming after them? :curiousity:

Yeah, where did me and TYler, go? Leah doesn't need singing lessons that bad... does she?

Hey. I have to agree with Dash on this one. OK, this story might not be...uhh literature but it's if you didnt you didnt have to write a freakin book insulting it. Yeah, I admit its not that great of a story but there's no point in being so rude, especially when (no offense) your 'wittiness' was a little stale.

-Kendall

To Dark:

Wahh... If you hate the story so much, then shut up and stop reading it. Obviously he has drawn quite a fan-base, so your advice is ill-directed. Not everyone strives for Shakespeare; if they did, then where would comic books come from?

I find it funny that you think so highly of yourself (and likewise expect us to think accordingly) that you actually consider it a blow to the author and his story that *gasp!* you don't care. You must really get off on telling people how horrid their writing is (and yet, we see no link to your own work... well, those who can't, criticize).

And you must think yourself oh-so-very clever. Here's a clue, babe: get a thesaurus, because your repetitive writing is getting on MY nerves. Nothing is more annoying than someone who thinks that they are witty (sorry, you're not).

And as for your reference to publishing his writing in "'The Twisted And Evil Peoples' #01 Handbook for Failing Miserably.'": wow, I'm impressed. Must have taken you all day to think THAT title up...

Just get off of your high horse and remove your upward-pointed nose from Fictionpress. Go on. Make my day.