|Reviews for Religion|
| miko miko miko chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
hmm ... i like the way it's kind of deep, if you think about it ... in a way, tho our beliefs might be all different, i guess we're similar, in that we believe. i dunn0. that's how i feel about it. it's nice! keep it up. and i've noticed you have a certain kind of style ... simple words, simple verses, but you're able to provoke thots in me with these simple words ... cool!
| Jacob Andrews chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Hm... it's okay, but to be honest I think ti could be better. I don't really think it counts as "poetry": all you're doing is saying something, and putting a bunch of enter spaces in between. You need symbolism, rhythm, anything that gives it that poetic feel. But nice start; hope to see more of your stuff, eh?
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
so true! Keep up the good work. *I like how the poem is centered on the page!*