Reviews for Look For Me By Moonlight
Brandon The Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
O! I like this alot. alot i do. Jackie jack jack is very nice very nice."When the glow is amber for my forgotten soul,And let me once prevail."

I like those lines the best,Keep it up.:).
Koala in Glasses chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
this was awesome. I really liked the tone of it and everything. Keep up the good work
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
very nice. the details and the rhyming was well done. vampires have always had a haze of misunderstanding. you seem to have lightened it a bit. that make sense? who knows. good job. *TI*
silverquill212 chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Interesting. At first I thought the narrator was Satan. Then I realized your poem was under the category Romance and looked at it differently. I can see now how it would relate to two lovers, but think about it... If the first one went to hell and the other followed, they would not see each other. It's hell! Satan would not allow them to be together. But it's a sort of Romeo and Juliet kind of thing. I don't know.
Either way, it kinda freaks me out. o_O Excellent job.