beautiful poem with a great moral behind it all! i especially loved the twisted ending! :)

BeautifulEcho

i can relate to a lot of that.. nice repition and descriptions.. incredibly sad ending

i like the turn of the tone with the last verse. nice work.

This is truly a beautiful and sad poem, I can completely relate to it. It shows creativity and brilliant writing talent. This is definately going on my favourites
Lozfairy x