|Reviews for arsenic in her tea|
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Fantastic imagery. I liked the allusion to Mary Poppins - love that movie btw. My fav stanza was: "beautiful in the face of death,rigor mortis at the breakfast table,and arsenic in her morning tea.". Another great piece.
| kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
lots of love. for such morbid subject matter it's arty and beautiful and with lots of faded soft colors. the whole picture you painted was really an artwork. instead of feeling horror at the suicide or pity or i don't know i just feel respect for the lady who is still grand in her silk and who must have lived too long.
| City of Angels chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
A wonderfully sadistic poem, written with the morbid calmness of a seasoned psychopath. Good job with providing us a slight insight into your tea-drinking persona's poem's going in my favs.
| Sasha73 chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
This has some haunting imagery in it. Lovely and dark elements mixed into an amazing poem that makes the mind think of things in a new fashion. Keep up the good work.
| Anthelia White chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Ahh, your poems are so utterly original and descriptive and insightful. You are a magnificant poet. Kudos for you.
| biblehermione chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Wow, greatly morbid. I love it!
"for a spoonful of poison helpsthe sorrows go down,in a most delightful way."
is going in my profile
| linaeve chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
beautiful. i love the vintage feel of this.
| myno chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
haha i love the end of the A/N lol. Nah, i'm not ukrainian, i'm american, but i lived in ukraine for 2 years. Anyway, good poem, very interesting, well written, as usual.
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
Wow, lol. You really are talented! I adore Mary Poppins, lol! And that song is awesome! *wants to watch Mary Poppins again* Your descriptions are wonderful, though your poems don't rhyme, I don't notice it because the flow is so good...You should make your summaries more interesting, lol, no offense, but something to attract readers because this definitely is worth reading! Love, Mia
| goldengirl67 chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Very sad, very hollywood, very fashionable. I love it.
| arcanum-zw chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
Waha. Melly breaking copyright laws. _ The last stanza was as ironic as it was chilling. In fact, the whole poem was full of irony. Stark contrast at every turn, the disturbing message of the poem was brought across, and brought across well.
(And now you can't complain I didn't review._)
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
I love it! Your descriptions are so lovely, I'm envious! Your poem was so deep, yet dark, yet ever so elegant. I'm at a loss of words (not to mention I'm getting tired, it's midnight -)Heh, hope you write more (and I hope I get a chance to review)!Sumi-chanTickle me Pickle!
| hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
good choice of words. i think you've brought out the atmosphere quite well. dark. very well written.
and doesn't wine drown our sorrows down too?
and give you delight in most absurd stupor
| Chi Ame chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Beautiful... you never cease to amaze me...
| moonarised polane chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
you blow me away as usual, kismet. wow.
new way to commit suicide. haha.
wonderful descriptions. apt.
the mary poppins thing was interesting.
nicely put in too and given a nice twist to it.