Reviews for Why My Life Too?
knowlee chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
This was very emotional. I was about to burst into tears when reading this. Why do people have to be so mean like that?
Just Jenita chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Very sad.

I like it, very powerful.

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Thornberry chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Meep... Wow. A ton of emotion. Near tears here. I like the point of view. Wow, I never read poetry but I just love yours.
XxParalaixX chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
its good. i like ryhming poems but this as just as good in other ways. It's really great!
asdfghjklkjh chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Oh my, that is so sad! (

It is such a moving, emotional poem.

It is a fantastic piece of work, really amazing. Well done.
uoyevoli chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
oh my .

the emotion is pretty intense.

great job. i absolutely love it.
lengg chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
its an excellent poem. Really nice. i like how you write the words and phrase them
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I absolutely loved the ending. You captured the feeling very well. I loved the whole tone of the poem.
Koala in Glasses chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
wow, i feel bad for that little girl. This is beautiful
Hanna Star-Runner chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
I like the last two lines most. Very nice, write more soon.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
great peice, a lot of emotion, thank you for sharing
q is for quirks chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
that's so sad...it's really good...
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
sad. I like it though.. life just isnt fair sometimes
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
You wrote it from the little girls perspective which only added to the sadness of emotion given off. very well written!
Kristal chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
Wow that was so sad, but you worded so well. Its so sad that that happens, it shouldn't, no one like that should exsist. Very good job.
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