Reviews for Ruin
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
RM prize review!

Sorry, I don't know how old this is. I just went for one that had fewer reviews.

I feel that this needs some stanzas. You have some distinct sections of ideas and I think it would help them progress if you organized them.

I do like this, though, particularly your last line. It adds a bit of a twist while stil staying with the same idea, and it wraps this up nicely.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
Good. Really hard on yourself, though. Well written.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
wow that was deep and i just loved it! it flows so well...just love the end