Reviews for Just Take Me Away
Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
really well written. simple but very effective!
Mrs. Reamer87 chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
so far this is my favorite
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
Cool. I like this a lot. Great work.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
wow who can't relate to that... good use of all those poetic devices.. yeah. good job!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
I like this, I really like your writing when your not writing about love, love is just not my bag, BUT THIS IS COOL! :) SHAZAAM
myno chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
You need some sort of punctuation at the end. It's a fairly simply stated poem, but there's a lot of emotion, and we can all relate...