Reviews for Cold Hearted
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Oh, I like this. My favorite stanza is: "Raw, blistered feet don't allow her to walk/ Yet she doesn't stop, she keeps trying/ Hope lights her ever darkening road tonight/ Maybe one day someone will stop her from crying." I like the fact that she doesn't give up even though no-one cares. It makes the theme of this poem even more powerful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Watch her pleading God for a new chance... I think pleading with God sounds better

Her soul must think all are heartless liars.. I think everyone instead of all or all men or people or something

I love this poem.. your poems are always awesome but this one was so pwoerful and sad and so true.. amazing job
lozfairy chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
I've always really loved that phil Collins song and this is a beautiful and moving piece of poetry, You really are a awesome poet :)
~Lozfairy x~