Reviews for Controlled
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
I like it... very nicely written
Deavon Brooks chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
this poem is the best poem concerning control that i have ever read. it is not clear who you are addressing, but maybe that was the point. very powerful poem, especially since it rhymes, which is hard to do when writing about such feelings. great job! hope to read more of your work.