Reviews for Don't Leave Me
l'orage d'absinthe chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
nice repitition. easy to relate to.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Very nice.

Noelle
zamthezombieman chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Wow, im sorry i haven't reviewed anything in a while. This poem reminds me of my mother...thats a different story.
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
This poem was good. I haven't reviewed you in a while but I had school off today so I thought i'd review some stuff. Keep up the great work. I loved the way this poem was like a metaphore to something very personal. I think it would be very easy to relate to this. Very skillful wrting.

jake
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
It sounds like you have a lot of arguing you're doing with yourself. I hope it gets resolved soon if I'm even right. Anyway I really liked the poem and the repition of the title added so much emotion!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
nice repition.. I like it