|Reviews for Raw and Beautiful|
| Ivriniel chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Wow. A breathtaking choice of words. I also like that the ending is the same as the beginning.
| A.D Williams chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Beautiful... wait a second... *stands from sitting position* you deserve this... *applauds*AMAZING... WONDERFUL... MAGNIFICANT!...nothing short of mere perfection sited through a silver glass! This poem glimmers with pride and...loveliness CONGRATULATIONS!-Amber
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
I am sure that the beauty of your imagry and passion of this peice, only mirrors your aperance in real life. Don't be so hard on yourself, my mother always used to say that every women is a goddess as long as she knows it.
Keep up the good work.
| Netogrof chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
It has a very dark and beautiful feel to it. I like it alot. Keep writing! D