Reviews for Bleed Romeo, Bleed
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
AWESOME! i love the anger in this poem! great job!
elise chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
wow, this was pretty awesome. although personal insults like "slut" and "whore" subtract a little from the potential power this poem has, i liked it! the ending in particular is great-emotional but a little careless too. keep up the great work!
Liar Through and Through chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
i love the last line... are you an athiest or just kinda out there or what? cause it seems like a lot of your stuff has something about religion in it.
gypsylass chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
i like this, i can feel the pain in the poem. my favorite lines are "You'll get your heart shattered/ And when it does, I hope you get cut." keep up the good work!
sTrive chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
Awesome! that was amazing. You should send this to him anonymously (if he's real- I sometimes just feel like writing about things that have never happened to me) It would completely freak him out. _
Yamadeo chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
I like this very much so. Its play on the play Romeo and Juliet, and the symbolism the characters played was very well done. I love the last few lines, especially how it all ties up in "Bleed Romeo Bleed" Very well done.