Reviews for I Hate, I Die
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
very very powerful and wellwritten
Deavon Brooks chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Very complex poem. all lines rhyme, which is hard to do when writing poems about how you feel (it's hard for me, anyway.) Good usage of words. Adjectives are helpful in portraying the image of your poem. Great job! Poem's very deep and full of meaning... hoping to read more
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Wow, that's a very raw and angry atmosphere you've got here. Someone must have run you over real bad. Excellent job.