Reviews for Phantom Lover
winged chronos chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
I usually dislike two- or three-liners, but the idea for this was so amazing. Wow. Very suggestive, very haunting. I sat here for five full minutes, contemplating fourteen words (sixteen including the clever title). I sense a sort of oppressive theme . . . and a twinge of emotional pain. Of course, the true interpretation is with the author, though you had me thinking.

Excellent, really. I've read some of your other works (very unique formatting, by the way), and I think this captured my attention the most. :-) You have a very vivid imagination - your imagery in your other poems is very impressive! All the best!

-Kay
Elzzar chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
cynical suggestive reference indeed... or am i just horny?
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Dark but i like it. Keep writing :D
catseyeview chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
How did I miss all these? So much said in such few words.
QueenSavvy chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
This was a short, but great poem! I like it like i like all the others you have done. There are so many good ones that you have written! I like them all! Did I ever mention that your username is awsome? "Faithless Juliet" It sounds so cool!
RomanceDeceptionist chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Hey! Thanks for reviewing my Poem!

I wanna say, that there need to be more poets like you out there. Im guessing that this poem is for Jessica, since you said all of your work was to her.

Awesome job! Very errie sounding.

-RomanceDeceptionist
SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
Interesting...short, but something about it really grabs me...
Bukowski Is chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
Oh...cold, dark, eerie/seriously creepy, but stunningly beautiful...
l'orage d'absinthe chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
*shiver*lovely-creepy!
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Cool. I like the dark, mysterious feeling around these words. _
teh tarik chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Oh, dark and beautiful. Excellent combination.
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Very awesome stuff... I love it a lot. Thanks for the comments on my stuff. I hope to keep seeing your stuff on here as well.
Write on.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
not really a haiku but still awesome
EvilNeko13 chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Hm... could be taken a many number of ways. Invokes the imagination to stir. I like it.
EvilNeko13
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
J—you are so good at provoking thought. m
Here's an echo haiku—
Somewhere without words,
Resonate cold bitter worlds,
In our deep dark soul.
m
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