Reviews for Outdoors For A Little Too Long
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
seriously its getting hard to come up with things to say. everything you write is just so perfect and nothing i say will do your work any justice. this again was perfect. keep writing :D
Hitsumei chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
_ Another fantastic work. The rhyme scheme is as perfect as usual, although at times the meter seemed a bit off. It could be that small variations in the pace and the rhythm were lost from writer to reader, which is common with poetry. Anyway, you have wonderful word choice. You pick perfect words to get the story or message across, to make the poem interesting and draw the reader in. You are a fantastic writer.
Take care,
Aya