Reviews for Velvet Red
Chandra Chhaya chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Wow. I was really touched by this poem. The words were extremely powerful and emotional. Your poem starts, flows, and ends very strongly!

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Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
I'll fly on faith alone- I REALLY love that line.. it's just so simplistic yet lovely. Nice job.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
it's finally letting me review! yay..first off this poem is AMAZING! not even kidding.. you're amazing.. haha yes.. it's so.. strong. (good word choice?) *shrug* it's so deep and emotional, and sad... but it's so good! i love it!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Wow. Very powerful words, especially the ending. great job.