Reviews for Desolate Dreams
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Wow; this was incredible. I love this one...It speaks of so much truth. I agree with every word that you wrote. Excellent work!
strawberryaid chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
cool. I can really really relate. I was just thinking on that same stuff today. The only thing that I think u could improve was the rhyming in some parts is forced like: '... make me numb, so that i won't be as dumb.' It sounds like u wanted to say something more. But i don't disagree with most the rhyming. I think it adds good rhythm. so good job! and god bless!
ToBmac chapter 1 . 11/16/2004