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Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
¿How could I guess?

That beneath cool lay hidden warmth,—

A mantle covering soul's depth.

¿How could I know?

That nesting was a way of life,—

A mother's instinct,—primal love.

¿How could I see?

That man's desire is so short lived,–

A pleasure whose purpose is life.

¿How could I think?

That daily strains would diverse be,—

A change of venue morphing things.

¿And what of now?

Easy to dream of geisha dolls,—

Trained to perceive and love deceive.

¿Is that my wish?

p.s. ¡Write more! lol ;-*
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
i wonder about the same thing all the time. good topic, i like it
myno chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
gah, I know that feeling so well, we're always trying to fool ourselves into believing that we can make love last forever. I mean, I think it can, but not with teenage love. Excellent poem, the ending especially was awesome.