Reviews for A Single Moment
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
single drops,—fall as rain,

single leaves,—drop as autumn,—

You & Every thing.

—Sipping one wine glass,

Treasuring one sunrise gold,—

Feeling Your heart near.

—First evening star dim,

Bathed in moon's gentle soft light,—

Prelude to night's sky.

—In my ear one word,

Gentle breeze,—warm musk inhaled,—

Tide of clarity.

—¿Are there many more?

I.E., poems coming forth,

From your pen my dear,

For I fear I'm running out,

Of places to leave traces.

(O.K. C- you've got to post some poems soon, although I've still got a good cushion of works to comment with. :) {LoL})
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
I wish we all got single moments like this one. it's a good poem and looks good double spaced.
myno chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
This is actually my current favorite of yours. It's sad, but I mean, at least while you're a teenager, it's true as well- love doesn't last. I agree, the double spacing is nice here.