Reviews for Sinful Acts
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
There are many sins in life, but not love,—

Sparks that well up moving heart to action,

Are more elemental than good or bad,—

Primeval forces fraught with energy,

Their charge laden with possibility,

That life might bring more life into life's light,

Can never be a wrong,—just difference,

From something else that might have been ordained,

Though circumstance and chance proclaimed the day,

For conduits that into life brought soul,—

¿How can then magic be judged mortally,—

When kisses myhrr demure under night stars,

Is this not what immortality is,—

A leap beyond into love's chasm deep?
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
interesting...not your best, but i like it.
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Wow. o.0 How powerful. Great work!


P.S. Thanks so much for reviewing my poem, "In the Meadow!"