|Reviews for Crippled|
| Laughing Facade chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
i can see this poem really shows how you are feeling my mom has been sick ever since i have a memory and its a really bad desease. i wish you didn't have to go through this sickness i really do.
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Aww *hugs* This is really sad and makes me all teary eyed. You describe yourself well. A truly great write my friend.~Hawke
| Mynix chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
chronic fatigue syndrome isn't a wonderful thing to go through.. I have two close friends that have this illness..
thank you for sharing your feelings and your illness with us that wish to understand. .. Good poem..
| Rara Punk chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
Great poem. You express your own pain - emotional and physical on the topic of your illness. Another great aspect of this poem is that it relates to others as well; an angsty poem about a broken heart. I love the lines "Muscles tangled and twisted/It hurts to be alive." Very Powerful stuff! :D