Reviews for Average Jayne
Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Nice poem, I liked it, and I haven't much more to say 'cause it was just that great.-Rae
Kressida chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
seriously alex, this is just great! i know how you feel, and this poem is really powerful and you describe how you're feeling really well. love it.. and you of course.. luv ya!Love Zai
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
its cool how a simple thing (ie; lokkin out a window) can turn into such a good poem!
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
This is excellent, yet another great work, keep it up

Love you

Keith Andrew