Reviews for Dreams
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
so so sweet. love it.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Abandoned Hope,—¿What's left but Dreams?

Azure moments consciousness flees from life,

Enthralled in love's luxuriant forest,

Brimming with orchid kisses teasing lips,

Nips and bites tender falling pink on skin,

Leaves every touch electrifying thrill,

As man musk and woman musk merge perfume,

Inciting all heart's passion with red flame,

Til yesterday, today and morrow scream,

That's there's nothing to life but loving Thee.

p.s. you might want to look at the following lines—minor typos—

"that me through my life"

that ( ) me through my life

"I can bare it all"

I can (bear) it all

{although I, personally, would prefer the first version on the occasion of being near that dream! ¡LoL!)
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
This has special meaning to me...I can relate to this personally. Thank you for this poem.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
dreams, yeay! i llike this
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
wow. i've tried writing about something like this b4, but it wasnt nearly as good. awesome...dont u wish sometimes we reely did have dream angels?
enjoy the silence chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Hoping i didn't just review this poem, if I did, then you know how much I like it. That is so sweet...aw. I love having someone to fall back on even in my dreams. This is such a cute poem Kudos.