Reviews for Desire
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
I hate Thee too Dear . . .

But I love Thy Poesy . . .

(Think of you as fond posy)

(¡Don't you dare take it that way!)

Faery dusted words . . .

¿Think Thee that I know,

What this morning's breath wrote down,

'Pon some white blank sheet?

Inspiration's more

Than most give their truest love

Even though heart's sore

(Truly makes heart soar)

I must get up now,

Tend to chores and day's routine,

Yellow sun shines bright.
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Beautiful, very raw and honest. I can totally relate
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
:) i dont know what else to write. youre amazing and theres only so many ways to tell ya that.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
aww. i kinda feel that way about a guy right now. but he's like in love w/ my friend and no one knows i like him...yea it's all messed up. great poem lol i like
doowopbop chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Aw. thats really nice. i like it a lot. Very good.