|Reviews for Desire|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
I hate Thee too Dear . . .
But I love Thy Poesy . . .
(Think of you as fond posy)
(¡Don't you dare take it that way!)
Faery dusted words . . .
¿Think Thee that I know,
What this morning's breath wrote down,
'Pon some white blank sheet?
Than most give their truest love
Even though heart's sore
(Truly makes heart soar)
I must get up now,
Tend to chores and day's routine,
Yellow sun shines bright.
| Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Beautiful, very raw and honest. I can totally relate
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
:) i dont know what else to write. youre amazing and theres only so many ways to tell ya that.
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
aww. i kinda feel that way about a guy right now. but he's like in love w/ my friend and no one knows i like him...yea it's all messed up. great poem lol i like
| doowopbop chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Aw. thats really nice. i like it a lot. Very good.