|Reviews for My Everything|
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Well… isn’t that sweet and rather gushy.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
¡Hey—those are my lines!
But,—like it when you say it,—
More's the better then.
—Thin M&M coat,
Red or Green or Yellow sweet,—
Melts so softly butter kiss,
With a sugar high for kick.
—If we both melt,–¿then what?
¿A mass of protoplasm?
—OK—No stiff knees,
That's a contraceptive trick,—
With an aspirin.
—¿What then?—¿Ab workouts?
All those repetitions dear,
¿Warm up exercise?
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
love is bliss...
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 11/19/2004
i like the 2nd better even tho its like the same.
| poetic abortion chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
I LOVE BOTH POEMS ! Your an amazing author ! Your poetry describes soo many emotions ! Keep up the good work !
~ Noelle ~
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
i like this format better, it's different. and you know i like the poem!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
i like this poem, kinda describes both true love and obsession. lol ur well on ur way to your goal, keep it up!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
I have to say that I like this format better, it just comes of smoother and more polished, even though your saying the same thing.
keep up the good work.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Love is the most powerful of all of the emotions, it can take hold of you like nothing else.