Reviews for My Everything
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Well… isn’t that sweet and rather gushy.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
¡Hey—those are my lines!

But,—like it when you say it,—

More's the better then.

—Thin M&M coat,

Red or Green or Yellow sweet,—

Chocolate inside,

Melts so softly butter kiss,

With a sugar high for kick.

—If we both melt,–¿then what?

¿A mass of protoplasm?

¿Or,—volcanic burst?

—OK—No stiff knees,

That's a contraceptive trick,—

With an aspirin.

—¿What then?—¿Ab workouts?

All those repetitions dear,

¿Warm up exercise?
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
love is bliss...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 11/19/2004
i like the 2nd better even tho its like the same.
poetic abortion chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
I LOVE BOTH POEMS ! Your an amazing author ! Your poetry describes soo many emotions ! Keep up the good work !

~ Noelle ~
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
i like this format better, it's different. and you know i like the poem!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
i like this poem, kinda describes both true love and obsession. lol ur well on ur way to your goal, keep it up!
Faithless Juliet chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
I have to say that I like this format better, it just comes of smoother and more polished, even though your saying the same thing.

keep up the good work.

Much love,

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
Love is the most powerful of all of the emotions, it can take hold of you like nothing else.

Much love,