|Reviews for Lovesick Smiling|
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
hehe i know the feeling. nice work.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
when i see your smile,
written wide upon clear sky,
¿how can i be blue?
—¿did you eyes shine blue?
when they twinkled with bright light,
—¿what's that in a dream?
that cannot contain your smile,
broader than all mind.
—¿how can i have cares?
when i see your lips so pink,—
broadly brushing Spring.
—You,—melted white snows,
Brought the sun light out again,—
Budding green,—New moon.
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
I love this, it reminds me of that total bliss when we are, what's the word "cheesy" in love. Nice.
| Katy Llewellyn chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
i think smiling is 2...
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
| myno chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Heh heh, that's awesome, I love the format, and yeah, its sappy, but its great.
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
dont you just love the new fictionpress? i no i do :) i like this poem, short and sweet
| Daffodil Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
I'm pretty sure 'smiling' is two syllables...
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
I like this, its almost retrospected, you alow the reader to not only relate to the main subject or person, but also another person as well. Very lovely. Keep up the good work.