|Reviews for Remembering Emily|
| Gameprowler713 chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
So far, so good. You definitely improved more on your kinda need to work on the grammar and the characters' dialogue. And it would kinda help if you added more detail (the characters, setting, ect.).Anyway, you did improve, and this story shows it. Just need to keep improving ...and keep updating!