Reviews for The Sophomore Season
All The Three Queens chapter 27 . 4/4/2005
Just from the title I knew it was going to be sad. And it was short, for you. Good, though. And yeah, sweet little Andy. I'll corrupt him soon enough.
belladonna820 chapter 27 . 4/3/2005
#1: If my child was a Yankees fan, I would disown him or her, so I guess your mom is a better person than me.

#2: While that thing from Conan was amusing, he's a Red Sox fan...he was definitely not disrespecting the Caveman.

#3: I like this develepment. It's very emotional. And everyone who thinks it's too depressing or too plot twist-y can bite me, because every single good book I've ever read in my life was depressing or plot twist-y.
murphy1086 chapter 27 . 4/2/2005
I can't believe they didn't get back together! Who was in the other car? I know I sound like a retard because I don't actually know, but update! This chapter was awesome
CynicInLove chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
i think i missed the part about ur other penname, im not too fond of short stories but occasionaly i cling to them. no harm in reading right? i think trent's so insistent on the fact that ally cheated on him, he wont believe her. stupid brain of his. all that alcohol, and now he's addicted to valium? ouch. he's not taking them together right? that's freaking dangerous. gah, cant believe him! *shaking trent furiously* and if i interpreted what u meant about his chapter being like "...memories, they linger on, it's like a sweet, sad, old song," then i'm sorry. it must suck, i know that's not much of a consolation, but im actually clueless where romance is concerned. maybe that's why i read so many of them here. i like vicariously through stories. somebody save me. BUT, im glad i do, cuz some of these stories are just undescribibly (is that a word?) amazing. anyways, please update soON!
Lemn chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
pls let them be back together and let trent wise up to the fact that nothing happened.. update soon
bibble chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
* in a dull creepy voice* this didn't resolve anything. i was all waiting and happy that you had updated because i expected trent and ally to get back together in this chapter. but all it did was make it worse. i expect them to resolve their "differences" by the next chapter... or else. *evil grin while you can see a flash of silver* or else.

p.s. please don't report to the police that i have mental problems and tell them to come and get me. becuase i don't! at least... i don't think so. *goes off to ponder wheater i have mental problems or not*
Guest chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
Again, yes to the short story thing and BWAHAHAHAHA to the whole Conan thing. I miss Andy! (*sobs in a corner for a little while*)

*comes out to finish the review* *realizes she has another reason to sob* TREENNT! YOU'RE. SO. STUPID. First you're doing the whole drug thing, now you're completely NOT BELIEVING ALLY YOU IDIOT...can I hit him, or something? He needs someone to knock some sense into his brain.

Ally should've jumped in front of the car. She should've used the rope! That's the only way to get a guy to stay!
BKGal-24 chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
Hey there girl! Yes...more of Trent being a complete ass! Woo hoo!

I loved the title of this chapter. Poor Al...he even admitted to cheating on her and she still begged him to stay. That's true love. You got me all curious as to who the person in the mystery car is.

I was so excited to see you update by the way, geh...I'm so sick all I wanna do is sit at the comp and read stories on FP...oh wait, that's what I do anyway when I'm not sick! hahaha.

I'll drop you an email asap...and go check out your short stories. I missed the deadling for the ones I was going to enter, just never found the inspiration to finish up my short story, but I'll work on the novels for the other two contests.

k, bye.
mailai chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
ok, seriously? at the moment its getting so frustrating that i think ally and trent shud be making their way to "recovery" round about now, or at least pretty soon. drawing the frustration out is good, but its not everything, i'm really looking forward to seeing the reconciliation (that had BETTER happen btw). kl
A.R chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
How could you leave it at that part? I need to read the next chapter so I can find out if Trent and Ally will get back together!

I would be interested in reading your short stories. I enjoy your writing.
Saharian chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
This chapter was pretty short but as that's all I have time for right now it makes me happy. I love the story right now but Ally is scaring me and she needs to eat and Trent is just a dingbat. Yeah that's right. I said he was a dingbat. And of course I would like to read your short stories. I love short stories _Saharian
Heather F. C chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
omg...i almost cried at the beginning.. why are men stubborn? they only believe in their own truth.. she was telling him the truth and he just told her that he was sleeping with a b* back at NYC? that must be totally devastating for ally.. poor al..i thought rob had ally in his car and would brought her after the training, but it didn't turn out that way! damn! i just hope that the other ferrari belongs to ally somehow.. that ending really confused me.. so this was really a great chapter as usual.. i just hope trent will give up drugs and get back to ally.. update soon...xoxo
wantmore chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
Hey...nice chapter..see the situation is kind of okay but not that good...just wish you would get trent back together with ally...o yeah i want to read your short stories if u can just send it to me or something...if it is anything like the stories u have so far they should be very good..wish u update sooner...update...stop reading n update lol
lindserly chapter 27 . 3/31/2005
i absolutely adore conan as well. he is hilarious. and the johnny damon thing made me laugh.

i'll read your short stories. i'm not a short story fan but i really like your work (well trent/ally saga anyway cuz that's all i've read) so i'm sure i'd like anything else you wrote. seeing as you are one of my fav authors on fictionpress.

i loved the title of this chapter when i saw it. i was slightly disappointed in the shortness of the chapter but at least it's a chapter, that's for sure. i'm glad trent told ally right away, i didn't want that other woman thing lingering.

i think given the circumstances, if i was in ally's place i'd have the same reaction. to get past the fact that he'd been with someone else. with everything going on, that's the last thing that needs to be dwelled on.

this is a really long review, but when i'm sleep deprived i tend to ramble on (i just pulled an all nighter).

anyway i would love for you to update soon :) i love to see that you've updated and i think when this story ends... i don't know what i will do.
kayli chapter 26 . 3/30/2005
That is NOT a place to stop!

Ugh, cliffhangers.
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