Omg did u see last nights episode of The OC? OMG it Was the BEST!Anyway, I totally loved this chapter. That was pretty gay of that dude Ecoli to call Ally fat...but w/e...maybe he's right? She should be geting toned for her wedding, haha jk...Can't wait till the next one, hope it goes BAM asap!

This chapter was really great with all the cuteness it had up until the phone call. i pray ally doesn't make a mistake. but yeah the puppies were so freakin' cute. made me want a puppy. well my cat'll do for now, she's a cutie.

and yay seth and summer. such a good episode tonight. the o.c. never fails to make me laugh.

this one was a nice chap... i just adore the puppies.. and the "ally needs a diet" thing was so fun... but Trent's comments were, as usual, lovely and funny! i love this story.. i just die to see what'll happen when Joey comes back, that s.o.b. (sorry for the expression but he is really).. so, O.C. rocks... AllyTrent rocks... This story rocks.. Vanderhall rocks.. LOL, i flatter, don't i?.. Update soon...

Great chapter! I love puppies!

Puppies? Golden retriever puppies? How could you make me drool like so? Give yourself a break. It didn't suck. You're dialogue is cute and witty and makes us adore Trent and Ally (and their new babies...speakng of babies, when is Trent Jr. coming into the picture?)

Aww, puppies! Now they don't need to have kids, since they already have two little ones. That'll be my excuse, too...

puppies! you can never have a sucky chapter when there's puppies involved! i love puppies. they're so cute. and adoreable. and awesome. so i guess my point is that this isn't a sucky chapter. its a good chapter. at least better than anything i can write.

Perfect.. This story is perfect.. love the Trent and Ally coupling. Pls let there be a happy ending for everyone… update soon pls..

Yeah, his chapter was kinda of eh-ish...but all the while wonderful to read. Not that much romance etween the two of them...pout pout...ut its all good. Can't wait till things start moving...ebcause no offence but its moving kind of slowly...Oh well, luv tha story!Hope you get the right motivation to write something fantastic soon!

It wasn't a crappy chapter, I actually liked it a lot. :):)

I didn't think it sucked! It was really good; I LOVED Trent's conversation with Ken, and the puppies sound so cute! They should've named one Bosco. But that's just my obsession talking.

omg ORANGE COUNTY! (sorry, that's where I'm from!) Great idea of coming up with a sequel! I loved A Perfect Game! (big Yankees fan!) I totally love your writing! You have an amazing talent and NEVER give it up!

~Laur

this chapter was soo cute!

i was expecting more of an explaination to trent's sudden realization of why he wanted to play again. oh well. trent's such a softie. he's like this big teddy bear...that makes me wonder...why do we refer anything that's cuddly to bears who are these ferocious animals. i just think that's very weird. anyways, writer's block is like the flu..u may have gotten rid of it but it takes time to heal back. please update sooN!

OMG I loved this chapter! It's the most adorable thing ever! Puppies are my #1 favourite thing. Well, dogs in general actually. And, scarily enough, shelties and golden retrievers are my favourites. Yes... I am weird... I have a border collie myself actually. Her name is Sasha and she is an insane pyschopath of a dog- never get a border collie. They have more energy than a child with ADHD (attention deficite hyper disorder) and trust me, I would know as a cousin of mine has it. Crazy times... anyway I also loved the passage about Trents weird little quirks. It's small inclusions like that that make stories so good. Update soon!Saharian